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NEWS PROJECT FEEDBACK

Math Feedback (Ethan Choi's presentation )

The title looks a little bit simple
and the size looks same with the articles. There's no citations and jargons also hierarchy is unclear. Could have some icons. Change the pictures because even though those pictures are related to the articles and math but not really related to Palmer.
 

ENGLISH LITERATURE FEEDBACK

The text of each pages is easy to see but you can write more details in there. Those photos are great and they match with the subject.
                                  -CiCi

The design can change a little bit
                                    katty

French Feedback (Daniel Zhang's presentation)

The images are low quality, not really related to the articles. Inconsistent spacing. Minor mistakes. Does not show common important. only a few example. 

Math Feedback

The photos are related to the article and the article is clear and easy to see but your design is too simple, you need to change that next time. 
                                 -CiCi

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